haiku at the zoo

(inspired by the coral reef tank– our favorite winter hang-out)

salt water ballet
color extraordinary
flows in slow motion


giggles and bubbles
grubby handprints on the glass
life beneath the sea


divine artistry
brings forth unfathomable
creativity


follow me, sissy!
-over, under, through, between-
adventure awaits!


unchoreographed,
the masses move in perfect
synchronicity

0 comments

  1. danthress says:

    >shaun, why don’t you let Lorie and I have a haiku-love match slam between rounds of the jazz slam?lorie, in this type of format we read back in forth 10 haiku’s. higest score wins. maybe 5 rounds would be better.

  2. amy says:

    >Not to redundantly repeat all the compliments that came before, but these are really great, Lorie. They make me want to go to the zoo.

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